Hello! Today I want talk a bit about me.I am 17 years old, I am five foot two, I take after to my mother.
In my free time I listen to music, go out whit my friends, go to shopping, etc.
for me life is the best gift, is the moment where you share with the persons that you love. life god give us, we have to use it nice for that our families will be happy with us.
THANKS FOR READ MY COMPOSITION.
GOD BLESS EVERYBODY.
BYE JUAN P. KISSES
PAOLA the word whit, is incorrect. The correction is with and also no is the life is the best, the correction is life, but it was good.
ResponderEliminarThanks pao, you are right. Bye take care
ResponderEliminarIn this sentence " I TAKE AFTER TO MY MOTHER" this word TO is not necessary.
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